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It's a Great Story
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Source
:
http://www.scan.tucoo.com
Listening:
•
Responding to expressions for persuading, encouraging and hoping
•
Responding to expressions for criticising and deterring
•
Responding to monologues of narrative texts
Speaking:
•
Persuading, encouraging and hoping
•
Using expressions for criticising and deterring
•
Performing monologues of narrative texts
Reading:
•
Reading a narrative text
•
Reading a short functional text: an announcement
Writing:
•
Writing a narrative text
•
Writing a short functional text: an announcement
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Listening
In this section, you will learn how to:
•
respond to persuasion, encouragement and hope;
•
respond to criticism and deterrence;
•
respond to monologues of narrative text.
Answer these questions.
If you are in the following situations, what will you
say?
1. Your sister tells you to enter a short story contest. You
are unenthusiastic about it. Your sister persuaded
you to join the contest. What do you say to respond
to her?
2. Your sister encourages you not to give up. What do
you say to respond to her encouragement?
3. You sister criticised you for being pessimistic. What
do you say to respond to her?
4. You say you intend to stop writing short stories. Your
sister advised you not to do that. What do you say to
respond to her?
5. Your sister hopes you will win the contest. What do
you say to respond to her?
Listen and repeat the expressions. Try to give a response
to each expression.
1. "Come on you can do it. Just this once."
2. "How can I persuade you to participate in the story
writing contest?"
3. "Just believe in yourself. I know you can do your
best."
4. "You're not going to let me down, are you?"
5. "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll do better this time."
6. "I don't think its was a good idea."
7. "I don't (particularly) like your story."
8. "I hope you will do it better next time."
9. "I don't think you should do that."
10. "I wish all the best for you."
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1
Activity
2
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s a Great Story
Doni
:
Hi, Andra. How are you?
Andra :
Doni! What a surprise! I'm
À
ne, thanks. How
about you?
Doni
:
I'm OK and you know...? I won the short story
contest.
Andra :
1
. Congratulations.
Doni : Thank you.
Andra : Actually I also sent my short story for the
contest. But
2
.
Doni :
3
. But don't worry about
it. All you need is a little more practise.
4
send your short stories to a
newspaper or magazine?
Andra : Yeah,
5
. But, as a matter of fact,
I'm pessimistic that my story will be accepted
by the newspaper or magazine.
Doni
: Come on.
6
.
Andra : OK.
7
to send my short stories
to the newspaper. Anyway, I'm thinking of
maybe stopping writing short stories.
Doni :
8
do it.
Andra :
Thank you for telling me.
Doni :
9
that your story will be published
in a newspaper or magazine.
Andra :
10
that so.
Listen and complete the dialogue while you are listening.
Compare your answers with your friend
ˈ
s.
Work in pairs. Find the following responses in the
dialogue you have just listened to.
1. A response to expressions for persuading
2. A response to expressions for encouraging
3. A response to expressions for criticising
4. A response to expressions for advising someone not
to do something
5. A response to someone saying what they hope will
happen
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3
Activity
4
Englishclub.com
Seeking opportunities to
actively use language is
very important to reach
the goal of fluency.
There are plenty of
opportunities to use
language. You will
À
nd
what they are at
www.
englishclub.com.
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You are going to listen to some short dialogues. Choose
the most appropriate responses to the expressions in
the dialogue.
Listen to the story and
À
ll in the missing words.
Answer the following questions.
1. Ryan :
a. I'll consider that.
b. If I were you, I wouldn't do that.
2. Sandy :
a. Well, I'll try.
b. Come on.
3. Cindy :
a. Come on ... Don't give up.
b. Sure!
4. Desi :
a. Thanks for your support.
b. Certainly. I hope so.
5. Ferdy :
a. OK. I won't give up.
b. All right then. I won't do that.
1. Do your parents teach you to work hard?
2. How do they teach you to work hard?
3. Do you think hard work brings its own rewards?
There was once an old,
1
farmer who had worked hard
2
all his life. Before he died,
he wanted to teach his
3
sons
how to be good farmers. So he called
them to him and said, "My boys, before
I die I want you to know that there
is a great treasure
4
in the
vineyard. Promise me that you will
5
for it when I am dead."
The sons promised and as soon as
their father died, they began looking
for the
6
. They worked very
hard in the hot sun and all the time as
they were working they
7
what their father had left for them.
The Farmer and His Sons
Activity
5
Activity
6
Activity
7
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s a Great Story
Listen to your teacher reading the following radio ad and
answer the questions from the tape.
Listen to the story again. Then
À
ll in the table based
on the story. Discuss the answers with a friend.
In their minds they pictured boxes
of gold coins,
8
necklaces
and other such things. Soon they
had
9
up every inch of
the vineyard. But they found not a
single
10
. They were very
upset. They felt that their hard work
had been for
11
. But then
the grapes started to appear on the
12
and their grapes were the
biggest and best in the 1
3
, and
they sold them for a lot of money.
Now they
14
what their
father had meant by the great treasure,
and they lived happily and
15
ever after.
Tittle :
Characters :
Setting :
Events :
Outcome :
Short Story Contest
Prizes worth over £350 (over $500)
Welcome to
À
rstwriter.com's Fourth International Short Story Contest. This
competition is open to
À
ction in any style and on any subject under 3,000
words long.
Activity
8
Activity
9
Taken from
New Headway English Course: Intermediate
Student's Book
, 2005
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Speaking
In this section, you will learn how to:
•
use expressions for persuading, encouraging and hoping;
•
use expressions for criticising and advising someone not to do something;
•
perform a monologue of a narrative text.
Answer the questions.
If you are in the following situations, what will you say?
1. You read a notice about a short story contest. You want
your brother to enter the competition but he refuses to
take part. Persuade him to join the contest.
2. Your brother says he is pessimistic about the contest.
You encourage him to be con
À
dent.
3. You criticise your brother for underestimating his own
talent for writing.
4. You hope your brother will win the contest.
5. Your brother says he will quit writing short stories
if he doesn't win the contest. You deter him from
doing so.
Read and study these expressions. Can you identify
the expressions of persuasion, encouragement, hope,
criticism, and deterrence?
1. "Come on. Don't give up."
2. "Why don't you try once again. I know you can do it."
3. "Don't worry, you can do better next time."
4. "
This story is awful. Sorry, I don't like it.
"
5.
"
I don't think this is good writing. It's confusing
"
6. "I hope you will do it better next time."
7. " I don't think you should do that."
8. "I wish all the best for you."
Activity
1
Activity
2
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ˈ
s a Great Story
Work in pairs. Read the dialogue aloud. Then answer
the questions.
Cindy : Hi, Sandi. How are you?
Sandi : Great. And you?
Cindy : Ahaha, it's a bit ridiculous!
Sandi : What's the matter, Cindy?
Cindy : The results of the short story contest were
announced this morning. And I didn't win
any prizes because I forgot to send it and I
just knew it this morning when I found the
envelope inside my drawer.
Sandi : That's too bad. But, don't worry about it.
You'll win another contest and you will not
forget next time. Will you?
Cindy : Yes, that's for sure. But I think I'll never win
a writing contest because I think I wrote it
badly.
Sandi : Huh, look at this short story. It's written by
Marcia an eleven years old. I think you can
write better. Would it be possible for you to
send your short story to the newspaper?
Cindy : OK, I'll consider that. Anyway, I'm not sure
the newspaper will publish my short story.
Sandi : Come on. Don't give up.
Cindy : Well, I'll try. If I fail, I'll quit writing short
stories. I must admit I'm not a talented
writer.
Sandi
: Oh, no. I wouldn't do that if I were you. I don't
think it is a good idea.
Cindy :
Thanks for telling me.
Sandi : Let's just hope that someday your short
stories will be published in a newspaper or
magazine.
Source
:
Publisher's Documentation
New Horizon
We speak for about
35% of the time.
Approximately 16% of
communication comes
from reading, and about
9% from writing. These
statistics are for an
average communicator
in English.
Taken from
Microsoft Encarta
Premium, 2008
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1. What does Sandi say to persuade Cindy to send her
short stories to a newspaper?
2. What does Cindy say to respond?
3. What does Sandi say to encourage Cindy?
4. What does Cindy say to respond?
5. Cindy thinks of quitting writing short stories. What
does Sandi say to tell her not to do that?
6. What does Sandi say to criticise Cindy's idea?
7. What does Sandi say to express his hope?
Practise the following short dialogue with a partner.
Pay attention to your intonation and expression.
1. A :
This room is a mess ! Why can't you be more
tidy?
B :
Sorry. I'll clear it up right away.
2. A : I hate to mention this, but you seem to be
rather careless.
B
:
I'm sorry. I'll try to be more careful in the future.
3. A : Your story is great. Why don't you try to
publish it? It can be a best seller.
B :
Thanks for your support and complement.
4. A :
Don't give up. Try and try again. Come on.
B :
All right then. I'll try my best.
5. A :
If I were in your position, I wouldn't do that.
B :
I'll consider your suggestion.
6. A :
How can I persuade you to join the club?
B
:
Well, thanks for asking me. I really appreciate
your concern.
7. A : I don't think you ought to buy that book. I
think the story is awful.
B
:
Oh really? Thanks for your advice. I'll consider
that.
8. A :
Go on! I'm sure you can do it.
B :
OK. Thanks for your encouragement.
Your Project
It's a group project.
Make some dialogue
using the expressions
for persuading,
encouraging and
hoping. You may also
use expressions for
criticising and advising
someone not to do
something. Choose any
topics you like. Then
perform the dialogue to
the class. You can make
a role play.
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ˈ
s a Great Story
What to Say
Expressions for Persuading
•
Would it be possible for you to ...?
•
Won't you ..., please?
•
Why don't you ...?
• Please!
•
Not even for me/for my sake?
•
Just this once!
•
You're not going to let me down, are you?
•
How I can persuade you to ...?
•
Could you/Couldn't you be persuaded ...?
Expressions for Encouraging
•
I wouldn't do that if I were you.
•
If I were in your position, I wouldn't ....
•
I wouldn't ... if I were in your shoes.
•
You would be well advised to/not to ....
•
If I were you I wouldn't ....
•
The way I see it, you should/shouldn't ‘....
•
I wouldn't recommend ....
•
I wouldn't advise ....
•
I don't think you ought to ....
•
I don't think you should ....
Expressions for Advising Someone Not to Do Something
(Deterring)
•
Come on ....
•
Don't give up.
• Go on!
•
Keep at it!
•
Keep it up!
•
You can do it!
•
Stick to it!
•
Don't worry, I'm sure you'll do better this time.
Study the following expressions for persuading, encouraging
and advising.
More Formal
Less Formal
More Formal
Less Formal
More Formal
Less Formal
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Look at the picture. Then answer the questions.
Create dialogues that contain the expressions you have
studied in the previous activities. Then act them out.
1. What do you see in the picture?
2. What is the woman doing?
3. What do you think the children are doing?
4. Have you ever told a story in English?
5. How did you do it?
Pretend you share an apartment. Criticise your partner
for being
a. lazy
d. noisy
g. sel
À
sh
b. clumsy
e. rude
h. untidy
c. careless
f. inconsiderate i.
forgetful
You will read a story. Answer these questions
À
rst.
What would you do if:
1. You had a lot of money?
2. You had no money but your father had a lot?
Source
:
www.britishcouncil.org
UN Shot
Fajar : Dad, may I
come along
to grandma's
house?
Father: I'm afraid not,
you are going
to have an
examination
soon.
Fajar :
Come on, Dad.
Please. Just this
once.
The underlined expression
shows ....
a. refusing permission
b. expressing an
apology
c. offering something
d. giving permission
e. wondering
(UN 2004/2005)
Activity
5
Activity
6
Activity
7
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s a Great Story
Pay attention while your friend retell the following
story in her/his words. The following questions will
help your friend retell the story.
Cheung Tsai was a good-for-
nothing fellow. He knew that his
father, old Mr Cheung was a rich man.
So Cheung Tsai was very careless with
his father's money and spent as much
as he pleased.
When old Mr Cheung found out,
he did not give his son any more
money. Cheung Tsai began to think
of a plan. He went to his friends and
borrowed money from each of them,
saying, "Don't worry. My father is so
rich that I can easily pay back all the
money I have borrowed from you."
Soon, he owed all his friends so
much money that they refused to lend
him any more. At last they began to ask
him for their money back. Cheung Tsai
did not know what to do, so his friends
all went to old Mr Cheung and asked
him for their money back.
Mr Cheung was very angry. He
gave his son two huge sacks full of
dollar coins and ordered him to go to
the home of each of his friends to repay
the money he owed them.
Cheung Tsai walked from house
to house, carrying the heavy sacks of
money. At last he thought to himself,
"If giving money away to people is such
hard work, how much harder must it
be to earn the money."
From that day onwards, he was
very careful with money.
Taken from
More Favourite Chinese Stories
, 2004
A Good Lesson
1. Who was Cheung Tsai?
2. What did Cheung Tsai do when his father did not
give him money any more?
3. What type of person is Cheung Tsai?
4. Why did Mr Cheung get angry?
5. What does this story teach us?
Fill in the table with the events of the story for each
paragraph.
Paragraph
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Event
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8
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9
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Answer the questions orally.
Reading
In this section, you will learn how to:
•
read narrative texts;
•
read a short functional text: an announcement.
1. Have you ever read a story that tells a good lesson?
2. What was it?
3. Can you tell the class what it was about?
Source
:
www.geocities.com;www.ebayimg.com
You will
À
nd these terms in a story. Match the terms to
their meanings.
No Terms
1. plot
2. setting
3. character
4. orientation
5. complication
6. resolution
Meanings
a.
describes scene and introduces the participants of
the story
b.
part of the story in which a problem encountered by
the characters
c.
the part in which the characters
À
nd the resolution.
d.
a person in a book, story, etc.
e.
the events in a story and how they develop
f.
one part of the story in which the events happen in
one place
Activity
1
Activity
2
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ˈ
s a Great Story
Read the story aloud.
The Lazybones
When someone is very lazy, we
often call him "lazybones". Young Tom
was a real lazybones indeed. Why,
right now his father was complaining
about him!
"That boy!" said Mr Jones. "He's
really lazy. He does nothing but laze
about all day."
It was true. Tom didn't care to
go out and play with his friends. He
didn't like to do his homework or any
odd jobs round the house either. After
school he went straight to his room and
lay down. After dinner he lazed about
again till it was time for bed. And in
the morning his mother had a hard
time getting him out of bed. Poor Mr
and Mrs Jones didn't know what to do
with their lazy son.
Mr Jones owned a small bakery in
town. He had only one helper, Bob; so
he had to work very hard. He baked a
hundred loaves each morning and Bob
went round on a horse-cart to deliver
them. Then Mr Jones baked biscuits
and cakes to put in his shop-window.
His cakes were delicious and many
people came to buy from him. He was
busy all day, but Tom did nothing to
help.
One day Mr Jones told Tom to
watch some cakes in the oven. Instead
of watching the cakes, Tom fell asleep
and the cakes were burnt. Mr Jones
was furious! "Can't you do anything
properly?" he scolded. "Why, you slept
all day yesterday. I don't know how
you can sleep any more!"
"Maybe Tom's just used to being
lazy," Mrs Jones said. "Everyone says
he's lazy, so he just stays that way."
Perhaps Mrs Jones was right. A
few days later Mr Jones had a bad cold.
The doctor said he had to stay in bed
for a week. "My goodness, I can't!" said
Mr Jones. "What will happen to my
shop?"
"Don't worry about the shop," said
Mrs Jones. "Bob, Tom and I will look
after it."
"Tom?" said Mr Jones. "As if he
would do anything to help!"
Although Mrs Jones looked cheerful,
she felt worried about how she would
manage. She could do the baking and
tidy the house. Bob could still deliver
the bread. But who could cook the meals
and look after Mr Jones?
"I know how to bake," said Bob.
"I've often watch Mr Jones baking. I can
do that job. Then you'll be free to cook
the meals and look after Mr Jones."
"But who will deliver the bread?"
asked Mrs Jones.
"Leave that to Tom," said Bob
cheerfully.
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"Tom stared at Bob. "That's hard
work," he said.
"And I'll have to get up very early
each morning."
"Well, somebody has to do it," said
Mrs Jones
À
rmly.
So, whether Tom liked it or not, Bob
woke him up at
À
ve every morning.
Together the boys loaded the horse-cart
with freshly-baked loaves. Then Tom
went round to deliver the bread.
Of course the customers were very
surprised to see him. You see, they
all knew he was a lazybones. "What
happened to Bob?" they asked.
So Tom explained how Bob was
baking because Mr Jones was ill. "And
you're helping too by delivering the
bread," the customers said. "Well done,
Tom. I'm sure your parents must be
very proud of you."
As the day passed, more and more
people praised Tom. After a while
Tom began to feel proud of himself
too. Working wasn't so bad after all.
In fact, it was quite pleasant to help
one's parents and be praised for it.
Can you guess what happened? Yes,
from that day on, Tom stopped being
a lazybones.
Taken from
Linguistic Readers
, 2006
Answer the questions based on the story in Activity 3.
1. Who was Tom? What did he look like?
2. What did he do after school?
3. What did Mr Jones own?
4. Why did he have to work very hard?
5. How many loaves did he bake each morning? Who
delivered them?
6. Where did Mr Jones put the biscuits and cakes?
7. What did Mr Jones tell Tom to do one day?
8. How did the cakes get burnt?
9. Why did Mr Jones have to stay in bed?
10. How did Bob know how to bake?
11. Who would cook the meals and look after Mr Jones?
12. What happened to Tom at the end of the story?
13. Did the story entertain you? Why or why not.
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4
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ˈ
s a Great Story
Match the words to their synonyms.
Complete the sentences with the words in Activity 5.
Make changes if necessary.
No Words
1. lazy
2. care
3. helper
4. deliver
5. delicious
6. busy
7. worry
8. look after
9. cheerful
10. pleasant
Synonyms
a.
enjoyable
b.
take care of
c.
assistant
d.
send
e.
full of activity
f.
tasty
g.
be anxious
h.
mind
i.
happy
j.
idle
1. I don't
whether we win or lose.
2. It must be
to live in such a peaceful
place.
3. Ian seems very
despite his illness.
4. Don't worry. I'll
the kids tomorrow.
5. Mom
if I don't call every weekend.
6. What are you cooking? It smells
.
7. Don't be
. Come and give me a hand.
8. We need several
for this job.
9. Your order will be
in
À
ve days.
10. We're
decorating the guest room before
our visitors arrive.
Activity
5
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6
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Noun Phrases
Study the following phrases. They are taken from the
text you have read in the previous activity.
•
an old grandmother
•
a gold snail
•
the eldest daughter
•
the fence hole
•
an awful beggar
•
a handsome man
•
delicious food on the table
These phrases are called
noun phrases
. A phrase is a
noun
and its
modi
À
ers
. A noun can be modi
À
ed by
adjectives,
articles, determiners, participles
and
in
À
nitives
.
The word that is modi
À
ed is often called the
head word
. Words
that come before the head word are called
premodi
À
ers
.
Words that come after it are called
postmodi
À
ers
.
Grammar
Review
Read the story and
À
nd the noun phrase.
The Man and the Serpent
A Countryman's son by accident
trod upon a Serpent's tail, which
turned and bit him so that he died.
The father in a rage got his axe, and
pursuing the Serpent, cut off part of its
tail. So the Serpent in revenge began
stinging several of the Farmer's cattle
and caused him severe loss. Well, the
Farmer thought it best to make it up
with the Serpent, and brought food and
honey to the mouth of its lair, and said
to it: “Let's forget and forgive; perhaps
you were right to punish my son, and
take vengeance on my cattle, but surely
I was right in trying to revenge him;
now that we are both satis
À
ed why
should not we be friends again?”
“No, no,” said the Serpent; “take away
your gifts; you can never forget the
death of your son, nor I forget the loss
of my tail.”
Taken from
http://www.bartleby.com
/
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7
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ˈ
s a Great Story
You will usually
encounter new words
when you read. If there
are too many new
words for you, then
the level is too high
and you should read
something simpler.
(
www.englishclub.com
)
Complete the following story using appropriate noun
phrase in the box.
• the big Crane
• terrible pain
• a small bone
• his teeth
• the reward
• a Wolf's mouth
The Wolf and the Crane
A wolf had been gorging on an
animal he had killed, when suddenly
1
in the meat stuck in his throat
and he could not swallow it. He soon
felt
2
in his throat, and he ran
up and down groaning and groaning
and searching for something to relieve
the pain. He tried to induce every one
he met to remove the bone. “I would
give anything,” said he, “if you would
take it out.” At last
3
agreed
to try, and told the Wolf to lie on his
side and open his jaws as wide as he
could. Then the Crane put its long neck
down the Wolf's throat, and with its
beak loosened the bone, till at last got
it out.
“Will you kindly give me
4
you promised?” said the Crane.
The Wolf grinned and showed
5
and said: “Be content. You
have put your head inside
6
and
taken it out again in safety; that ought
to be reward enough for you.”
“Gratitude and greed do not
together.”
Taken from
http://www.bartleby.com
/
Read the announcement and tell to the class what it
is about.
6th Annual Saturday Writers Short Story
Contest 2007. Awards: $100, $50, $25.
Entry fee: $5, maximum of three entries.
Deadline: Postmarked by September 15, 2007
Info:
Amy Burle, 708 W. Bridge Street, Keytesville MO
65261; http://www.saturdaywriters.org/
New Horizon
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8
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Writing
In this section, you will learn how to:
•
write a narrative text;
•
write a short functional text: an announcement.
Answer these questions.
Before you learn how to write a story, give the correct
punctuation and capitalisation to the following story.
1. Have you ever written a short story in English?
2. If yes, what kind of story was it? What was the story
about?
3. Did you
À
nd any dif
À
culties in writing?
4. Do you know the stages for writing short stories?
5. Do you always go through stages when you write a
short story?
the Cock and the Pearl
a cock was once strutting up and down the
farmyard among the hens when suddenly he espied
something shining amid the straw. Ho! ho! said he,
"that's for me." and soon rooted it out from beneath
the straw. What did it turn out to be but a Pearl that
by some chance had been lost in the yard? you may
be a treasure,” said Master Cock, to men that prize
you, but for me I would rather have a single barley-
corn than a peck of pearls.
"precious things are for those that can prize them."
Taken from http
://
www.aesopfables.com
/
Activity
1
Activity
2
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It
ˈ
s a Great Story
Once upon a time there was a prince
who wanted to marry a princess; but
she would have to be a real princess.
He travelled all over the world to
À
nd
one, but nowhere could he get what he
wanted. There were princesses enough,
but it was dif
À
cult to
À
nd out whether
they were real ones. There was always
something about them that was not as
it should be. So he came home again
and was sad, for he would have liked
very much to have a real princess.
One evening a terrible storm started;
there was thunder and lightning, and
the rain poured down in torrents.
Suddenly a knocking was heard at the
city gate, and the old king went to open
it.
It was a princess standing out
there in front of the gate. But, good
gracious! what a sight the rain and the
wind had made her look. The water
ran down from her hair and clothes; it
ran down into the toes of her shoes and
out again at the heels. And yet she said
that she was a real princess.
Well, we'll soon find that out,
thought the old queen. But she said
nothing, went into the bed-room, took
all the bedding off the bedstead, and
laid a pea on the bottom; then she took
twenty mattresses and laid them on the
pea, and then twenty eider-down beds
on top of the mattresses.
On this the princess had to lie all
night. In the morning she was asked
how she had slept.
"Oh, very badly!" said she. "I have
scarcely closed my eyes all night.
Heaven only knows what was in the
bed, but I was lying on something hard,
so that I am black and blue all over my
body. It's horrible!"
Now they knew that she was a real
princess because she had felt the pea
right through the twenty mattresses
and the twenty eider-down beds.
Nobody but a real princess could
be as sensitive as that.
So the prince took her for his wife,
for now he knew that he had a real
princess; and the pea was put in the
museum, where it may still be seen, if
no one has stolen it.
There, that is a true story.
Taken from
www.short-stories.co.uk
The Princess and the Pea
Read the following story carefully.
Activity
3
142
Developing English Competencies
for Grade XII of Language Programme
Fill in the story map based on the story in Activity 3.
Narrative Text Pattern
Name
Date
Story Map
Use this handout as you read the story.
Event 1:
Outcome/Resolution:
Plot/Problem
Major Character:
Minor Character:
Setting:
Where:
When:
Study the following stages of writing. Go through the
stages when you write your story.
• Stage 1: Planning
Get ideas, think about topic, discuss it with others,
read about it. Then sequence your ideas.
• Stage 2: Drafting
Write your first version. You can make changes
as you write.
• Stage 3: Revising
Read through to see if your writing makes sense and
that the main purpose of your story is clear. Delete
unnecessary words, details or events. Read your story
aloud to yourself and decide whether it sounds good
or not.
• Stage 4: Proof-reading
Check your spelling and punctuation. You can do
this yourself or ask someone else.
• Stage 5: Presentation
Write the
À
nal version neatly. Present it attractively
for your reader.
Event 2:
Event 3:
Activity
4
Activity
5
143
It
ˈ
s a Great Story
Write a short story. Get ideas from the following.
1. Do you recall a time in your own childhood when one
or several events occurred that made you extremely
happy?
2. Did you ever do something bad because it was terribly
tempting, and then were punished for doing that?
Read the announcement. Then
À
ll in the table.
Omaha Chapter of the NFB - Writing Contest for
Short Stories
Awards
: $100, $50, $25, $10 honorable mentions
Entry fee
: $5
Deadline
: September 15, 2007
The competition is a fund raiser for the Omaha Chapter
of the National Federation of the Blind. Enter the contest
and win some cash while supporting a worthy cause at
the same time.
Info
:
http://www.midwest
À
ctionwriters.com/ or www.
midwest
À
ctionwriters.com/node/2
Event:
Prizes:
Fee:
Deadline:
Purpose of the event:
Websites of the organizer:
Write an announcement about a writing contest.
Include the points you have just learned in the previous
activity.
Your Project
You can make your
own book. You have
written a short story
in the Writing section.
Collect your story and
your classmates' in a
À
le. Give an illustration
to each story. Design the
cover and layout of the
book. You can use some
computer programs for
design and layout. Then
copy and bind your
works. Now you and
your class have your
own anthology of short
stories.
Activity
6
Activity
7
Activity
8
144
Developing English Competencies
for Grade XII of Language Programme
1.
Language Functions
a. Persuading, Encouraging and Hoping
Persuading
•
Why don't you try it once more?
Encouraging and hoping
• I hope you will pass the test.
b. Using Expression for Criticising and Deterring
•
I don't think it was a good idea.
•
If I were you I didn't do that.
2.
Genre
Narrative
Social function: to amuse, entertain and to deal with actual or vicarious experience
in different ways; narratives deal with problematic events which
lead to a crisis or turning point of some kind, which in turn
À
nds
a resolution.
Generic structure:
•
Orientation :
sets the scene and introduces the participants
•
Complication:
a crisis arises
•
Resolution :
the crisis is resolved, for better or for worse
Chapter Summary
After learning the lesson in this chapter, you are expected to be able to:
1. respond to expressions for persuading, encouraging and hoping;
2. respond to narrative text;
3. persuading, encouraging and hoping;
4. perform a monologue of narrative text;
5. read narrative texts;
6. write a narrative text;
7. identify an advertisement, poster, and pamphlet.;
Now, answer the questions
:
1. What expressions do you use for persuading, encouraging and hoping?
2. What do you say if you want to criticise or deter someone?
3. What are the elements of the story? Explain them.
If you
À
nd some dif
À
culties, consult your teacher or discuss with your friend.
Learning Re
Á
ection